> Forever Sophie Chapter 5 Part 3 is HERE
Chapter 5
Chapter 4
Chapter 3
Chapter 2
Chapter 1
I think I finally found a writing style I am comfortable with. I also revisited the older chapters I worked on, and I have been considering maybe going back and rewriting them in this style. Mainly, I'm talking about the inner monologues/ voices inside the character's heads. I found this from playing Disco Elysium, which has multiple voices that represent different thoughts inside the character's head, I think it gives more insight into their psyche, something I don't think I nailed very well in the first few chapters. I will probably redo the older chapters later, maybe after I finish season 1.
I have also considered changing the font. I do it in chapter 6. I am still figuring things out, but I am having fun. I feel I wouldn't have done anything if I kept redoing things over and over. I just had to make it, then fix it along the way, which is good cause it's a long way.
Here's the giant crustacean the gobos were riding in part 1. They're called Landpeircers
